nothing specific !!!!
making a French friend ~who makes me think of Kunal
especially when she used xD or P.
oh and she went to china for study before
she is so cute, very nice.
she is really helpful ! she revised errors of my French self introduction
I wish I could be her friends
becoz damn ittttt I really need talking to sb !!!!
btw, should I drop a text to Kunal ??????????
I have no idea actually
and today a call with Mrs.星星
some problems in y essay :
logic ( 站不稳）
not specific ( too general )
background information is not enough
children could read stories by themselves. what kind of children ( you need to set a restriction )
topic sentence is too long ( brief / I don't need to write complicated sentences , which may further confuse readers )
grammar errors ( no big deal )
sentence are very simple
good night !!!
I have to review m